一般的漫畫作文都是以揭露問題為主,這類題材的文章可采用3段式---第一段描述漫畫,提出漫畫中揭示的問題;第二段分析問題的成因或問題可能導致的不良后果;第三段談個人看法或建議。 此類作文常用句式有:(開頭段)From the picture we can see that __(描述漫畫中的情景)__. What is illustrated in the picture is __(提出漫畫所揭示的問題)___. (中間段) There may be _(2 or 3)__ reasons responsible for / accounting for/ contributing to this phenomenon. (結尾段) As far as I am concerned, effective measures should be taken to _______. 2、注意事項 1. 書寫清晰,卷面整潔; 2. 重視首段和首句; 3. 重點檢查每個句子中動詞使用是否正確,因 為動詞錯被認為是嚴重錯誤; 4. 分段書寫.目前很多文章通常有三個部分組 成---提出問題,分析問題,個人觀點; 5. 記背結構詞句、典型文體的模板。 “啟”---創造良好開端。常用表達 “啟”的過渡詞語和詞組有: in the first place, firstly, to start with, to begin with等。 常用表達 “啟”的句型有: as is known to all/ as we all know; as the proverb says; 等。 “承”---順勢承上啟下。常用表達“承”的過渡詞語和詞組有:secondly; in addition; besides; furthermore; moreover; what is more; what is worse, in other words等。常用表達 “承”的句型有:compared with that…; It can be easily proved that…; It is no wonder that…; what is more serious is that…等。 “轉”---巧妙轉折過渡。常用表達“轉”的過渡詞語和詞組有:but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in spite of, regardless of等。常用表達 “轉”的句型有: Every coin has two sides.等 “合”---完美結束全文。 常用表達“合”的過渡詞語和詞組有:in a word, in conclusion, in summary, as a result, above all, on the whole等。常用表達 “合”的句型有: something must be done to….; it can be safely concluded from… that…; it may be briefly summed up as follows等。 ? People have paid more attention to economic growth than the environmental protection. / People have given priority to economic growth over the environmental protection. ?It is well known that…/It is commonly believed that / It is universally acknowledged that…
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