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2015長寧區中考英語二模作文范文

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94.Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A Good Habit of Mine” (請以“我的一個好習慣”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)

Use the following as necessary points:

1. What’s your good habit? (Describe it with an example)

2. Why do you think it is good?

3. How will you keep it in your future life?

Ø 昂立中考名師陸婧老師樣文：

Plans are indispensable necessities① in our daily life, ②which means you won’t lead a successful life if the life you are leading is without them. ③ I am always proud to own a habit of making To-Do-Lists everyday. ④Judged from personal experiences, this habit did⑤ help me to become a better planned person. Take our trip last time as an example: ⑥Having spent a whole week making the list of what I should buy and bring before packing my language, I completed the packing in just 2 hours with 50 minutes in Carrefour included. I can always save a large amount of time in this way. ⑦All I need to do is to simply note down these Must-to-tasks occurring to me.

Then I can check it later in the day. Nowadays, with the development of technology, ⑧seldom do people usepaper and pens any more. They are not easy to carry at all. This situation goes the same with⑨ me.

However, I am so surprised to find out ⑩that there are plenty of “to-do-list” apps in Apple Store now and many of them are of perfect designs! So without any doubt and any difficulty, I will definitely keep this habit of mine. (204字)

Ø 內容分析：

長寧區的這篇作文為全命題作文，文章內容有明確規定，注意看清楚提示語“Use the following as necessary points”所以一定要按照要求將下面的三點全部寫進文章當中，注意文章內容長度的比例分配。

Ø 精彩亮點分析：

亮點一：indispensable necessities 不可或缺的重要組成部分。

亮點二：開篇一句非限定性定語從句強調計劃的重要性。

亮點三：開篇一句大的定語從句套了一句條件狀語從句，狀語從句里面又套了一一句小定從。

亮點四：過去分詞做條件狀語。

亮點五：使用強調句式，一個did更加強了語氣。

亮點六：現在分詞做時間狀語，因為后面主句用的是過去式completed 所以從句用having done結構，強調在此之前。

亮點七：簡單的主系表結構，主語用了定語從句，表語用了現在分詞做后置定語。

亮點八：否定詞前置，采用倒裝結構。

亮點九：go the same with sb. 某人的情況也是一樣的。