中考英語作文難寫不？上過中考三項(xiàng)班的同學(xué)們此時(shí)，嘴角一揚(yáng)，會(huì)心一笑，面對(duì)二模他們也只想說so easy！

       “環(huán)保、興趣愛好、抒情暢想”，這些話題都是課堂上的老面孔。落筆生花，信手拈來

只要一眼，就讓閱卷老師在茫茫卷海中，找到這份試卷。靠實(shí)力，靠技巧，靠新意，當(dāng)然 也要靠范文~

        作文深深深幾許，實(shí)用范文來幫你。下面小昂給大家分享三篇范文，適用話題廣泛。同學(xué)們快來將其中的美言佳句收入囊中，化為己用吧~（文末附2017年上海各區(qū)縣二模作文題目）

Things we can do make our city 

a better place

① The prosperity of a city cannot be achieved without the effort of every citizen.

② Just as an old saying goes , ‘ A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. ③ The very first thing that we can do is to make the environment of our communities better and better, such as planting more trees，picking up litter and so on. Moreover, we can act as volunteers to promote people’s awareness of obeying social rules. Last but not least, efficient laws ought to be made by our government to guard the justice and civilization of our city. ④ Taking all of these into consideration ,  we are bound to make our city a better place to live in.

 賞析

① 總起句，開門見山，點(diǎn)出我們每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該為城市的發(fā)展盡一份力。

② 借用俗語，萬丈高樓平地起，來闡釋說明從小事做起，小的方面做起，來讓我們的城市更加的美好。

③ 活用了定語從句和非謂語形式將句子結(jié)合一起。

④ taking ..現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，使得文章的總體句式結(jié)構(gòu)更加的多樣化。

Extensive reading is a good habit

① A good habit is like an essential quality of a person.  ② With the enthusiasm for reading these years, people apply themselves to assorted materials.

③ Reading has never failed to fascinate me since childhood. During that period, I received various books from my parents, thus acquiring the habit in the spare time. ④ It can not only broaden my horizon but enrich life experience as well. ⑤ As Frances Bacon once put, "Histories make men wise, poets witty, mathematics subtle, natural philosophy deep. "In addition, we have more common topics with friends.

⑥ Therefore, extensive reading contributes to abundant knowledge and literacy, ⑦ which is a good habit and bright star guiding me to the future.

 賞析

① 首句亮出自己對(duì)好習(xí)慣的看法

② With the enthusiasm for reading 介詞短語闡明閱讀熱的現(xiàn)象，apply themselves to“致力于”呈現(xiàn)其熱衷程度

③ Reading has never failed to fascinate me，“閱讀總是吸引著我”，thus acquiring the habit分詞作狀語，通過自己的實(shí)際生活，由此養(yǎng)成了習(xí)慣

④ broaden my horizon與enrich life experience體現(xiàn)閱讀的魅力

⑤ Histories make men wise, poets witty, mathematics subtle, natural philosophy deep名人名言為文章增添文采

⑥ contributes to abundant knowledge and literacy 閱讀有助于豐富的知識(shí)和素養(yǎng)

⑦ 非限制性定語從句再次點(diǎn)題，廣泛閱讀是一種好習(xí)慣

Our last class meeting in junior school

Our last class meeting in junior school will be held soon, ① which is almost the end of our middle school years.

 As far as I’m concerned, some precious memories of our past three years should be ② recalled. Additionally, a warm discussion relating to senior high school entrance examination ought to be organized, which is a reminder of sticking to our study. Last but not least, we will ③ express our gratitude to our parents and teachers who are always encouraging us when we are in trouble.

④ There is no doubt that our last class meeting in junior school will be of great success and our memory of it will never fade away.

 賞析

① ……, which……為非限制性定語從句的使用；

② recall 意思為“喚回，使想起”；

③ express one’s gratitude to sb. “對(duì)某人表達(dá)感激”句型的使用；

④ there is no doubt that ……“毫無疑問”，同位語從句的使用。

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