作文是各類英語考試中得分率最低的題型之一。同學(xué)們?cè)谡莆樟艘欢ǖ淖魑哪０澹突镜恼Z法、詞匯、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中創(chuàng)造一些詞匯和句型的閃光點(diǎn)，必定會(huì)使你的作文如虎添翼！
高分作文標(biāo)志:
1：是否長短句交叉；
2、是否會(huì)使用插入語；
3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；
4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；
5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。
下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：
1. 適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
2. 善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。
比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think,
people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭力)
下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I ( By Simmy )
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替換 very
thrilling 替換 exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth.
google 替換 search
an army of 替換 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情； Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular
Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …
Advancement 替換 development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter into
Current ( currently )替換 now
Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替換 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型， 說某事是毫不夸張的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
For a start 替換 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)
Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替換 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語， function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to
Emerging 替換 appearing ( fading 替換 disappearing )
Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ，do 強(qiáng)調(diào)
Positive 替換 important / good 等
A slice of 替換 a part of
Unfavorable 替換 bad
Impacts 替換 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語
Fruits (而且fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage ) Facet 替換 aspect
各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn)，作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢
以下是30個(gè)最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下:
1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad
如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換
eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.
注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think
(因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.
Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.
Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替換 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth
23.desire 替換want.
24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替換remember
26. enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)
27. interaction替換communication
28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible
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